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April 7, 2022

 

                                


Commentary for April 7, 2022:

Up until now, I’ve been mostly avoiding having characters use the kind of profanity you couldn’t have on TV before 9:00 pm in the UK. Essentially, I wanted to keep the language in line with what the limits in official Sonic fiction appear to be. That is, by and large, still true, but I’m not averse to dropping the occasional “shit” or even “fuck” now and then if the situation calls for it. It’s something I want to be careful with, though; in the original Eon’s Comic, I got to a point where the overuse of profanity was simply juvenile; it felt as awkward and out of place as the mild swearing in Shadow the Hedgehog and the more coarse language in Torchwood. I’m hoping I can do a better job of it now than when I was in my late teens and early twenties.

Anyways, how about that Darryl Fennec? If you’ve read Vol. 2, you’ll probably be familiar with him already. Now, Darryl didn’t originally appear as early as this in Eon’s Comic; he didn’t make his first appearance until about four years after the original version of this story, in fact. But, given his later importance, I wanted to introduce him earlier so he wouldn’t just show up out of nowhere then. I expect he’ll be making a few more appearances here and there between now and when Eon’s World Vol. 1 catches up to the point in the story where he originally debuted in Eon’s Comic, but we’ll see.


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