August 26, 2017

                                


Commentary for July 29, 2020:

First of all, Iíd like to apologise for the long delay in continuing to work on getting the updated pages of Eonís World Vol. 2, season 1 done. In the time since I did the previous page, Iíve basically done the entire second season run of Eonís World Vol. 1, which I can now confirm will conclude on September 6, 2020. But thatís not what this commentary is for.

This is the first real taste of some of the levels of blood and gore Chapter 7 gets to, although it is far from the most extreme. Still, itís a nasty image to see a guy impaled on a support strut like that. If I ever did a complete remake of these chapters (spoilers: Iím not going to), I donít know that Iíd remove this death completely, but I might tone down the level of gore here a little. Then again, I did show Antoine DíCoolette slashing GUN soldiers open with a sabre in Chapter 30 of Vol. 1, so maybe this level of violence is acceptable for Eonís World? I tell you what I definitely would do, though; Iíd make Jared an actual character with some prior story presence up to this point and not just some redshirt for the named characters to emote over in this one scene.

Anyway, I hope to get more of these pages and attached commentaries done in the next few days, so the rest of Chapter 7 should be done soon.


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