April 2, 2016

                                


Commentary for December 23, 2019:

I think I must have felt so rushed to get work on each page done whenever it was that I was working on this chapter due to how much more limited my time was, which is why I made such foolish mistakes as overwriting image files or not properly saving them as much as I seem to have done. The final panel is yet another example of where I don’t have the original, fully sized image to work with and had to take it from the original unmerged page file with the panels, frames, and word balloons all on separate layers. Still, at least I have that much, or this remaster would be basically impossible to do.

I remember being very nervous about doing the crowd shot in Panel 1 of this page. I knew I was never going to draw each individual person in the crowd, but I do wonder if I could have done better than just a silhouetted mass like I’ve done. I think it’s an area I still need to work on, really.

As with the previous chapters, I have now made an updated version of this page, which is larger, with clearer text, to make it consistent with Chapter 7 onwards. Hopefully, this will make the earlier chapters easier to read.


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