May 4, 2013

                                


Commentary for May 4, 2013:

As much as I like this page, I think it's pretty clear that my model work needs outlines. Don't worry, as of chapter 2, it does. I think the bridge of the Olympian looks a bit bland without any outlines...

Aside from that, I'm pretty pleased with how this page turned out.

Oh yes, May the Fourth be with you!

Addendum for October 3, 2019:

In order to bring the format of the earlier chapters into line with Chapter 7 onwards, Iíve made an updated version of this page, which is larger, with clearer text. Hopefully, this will make the earlier chapters easier to read.

Given that resize, you may be able to make out the text on the screen behind Eon in panels 5 and 6. Points if you recognise it.


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