May 1, 2013

                                


Commentary for May 1, 2013:

Oh wow! Almost a whole page of action.

This one was pretty fun, if tricky to draw, and I'm generally satisfied with the results. Panel 1, I think, I did especially well on. Unfortunately, I do think it's a tad unclear as to what happened to the fugitive Eon tripped up in that first panel. The idea was that he was knocked out cold by hitting his head on the bulkhead when he went down, hence why he's just lying there in panel 3.

If you're straining to read the imprint on the gun in panel 5, it reads "PnP-65 MADE IN ELYSIUM", Elysium being a Martian province.

Addendum for October 3, 2019:

In order to bring the format of the earlier chapters into line with Chapter 7 onwards, Iíve made an updated version of this page, which is larger, with clearer text. Hopefully, this will make the earlier chapters easier to read.


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