August 10, 2022



Commentary for August 10, 2022:

I know I beat this drum all the time, but doing this comic in this format gives me so much more leeway to expand upon dialogue scenes and include character moments. In the original version of this story from 2018, there just wasn’t room for me to show the consequences Kari-Ya and Iago ended up facing. But this time around, I was able to include this scene. And it was very important for me to have this moment between Kari-Ya and Horatio afterwards, too, to sort of bookend the chapter along with their earlier conversation. A bit like in Chapter 39 with Sonic and his family, I wanted to show that, despite their disagreements, these two at least do care about each other and have a good relationship.

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