April 2, 2016

                                


Commentary for December 23, 2019:

Thereís a lot in the original script to this chapter that I either found too overwhelming to realise on the page or decided was inappropriate. One of the things Iíd scripted to happen here was for Severnaya to be literally sharpening his claws on the edge of his sword, in what would have been a fairly intimidating flex at Kochanski. I donít know if I decided that was just too malevolent for a military commander who is ostensibly one of the Good GuysTM or if I just wasnít confident enough in my ability to draw it, but either way, we ended up with him just polishing his sword instead. Frankly, just having the sword out during this interview with Kochanski is, I think, enough of a flex.

As with the previous chapters, I have now made an updated version of this page, which is larger, with clearer text, to make it consistent with Chapter 7 onwards. Hopefully, this will make the earlier chapters easier to read.


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