April 2, 2016

                                


Commentary for December 23, 2019:

Back in the days of Eonís Comic, I had a bit of a trope where someone -- almost always an overconfident military leader, come to think of it -- would wind up in a horrible, overwhelming situation, and just freeze or start babbling incoherently, as if something in their mind had just snapped. This would usually come after arrogantly bragging about their absolute certainty of winning the day, too. I think I was definitely channelling that trope for Kochanski here, which I think is fine, because itís the only instance of it in Eonís World Vol. 2 so far (and Eonís World as a whole at the time of writing at least). But I also think I need to be careful not to overdo it when I get to those particular plot twists from the old Eonís Comic in Eonís World Vol. 1. Not to say I will never do it, but it will be more limited than before, I should think.

I have to admit, after discussing the emotional impact of a traumatic betrayal on Kochanski, I feel kind of bad now saying that I really enjoyed drawing Fitz slapping him in that last panel. But, by the gods, he deserves a good slap, all things considered, and it was only ever going to come from Fitz.

As with the previous chapters, I have now made an updated version of this page, which is larger, with clearer text, to make it consistent with Chapter 7 onwards. Hopefully, this will make the earlier chapters easier to read.


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