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November 19, 2014 |
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Commentary for November 19, 2014: Almost forgot it was Wednesday! What can I say about this page, honestly? I am really satisfied with it! The only part that I'm not a hundred percent sure about, is panel 3, but that was kind of experimental for me, since I haven't done much drawing of extensive planetary surfaces in this comic yet. So, there was a lot of trial and error involved. I'm not sure about the splodgy patches of vegetation here, but I think it's okay. Something to work on, either way. Still, everything else about this page, I am pretty happy with. The Confederate fugitives in panels 4 and 5 are wearing combat uniforms, rather than the usual duty uniforms, since they expect to be going into battle soon. I basically took the original combat uniform design from the sprites and adapted it, since I didn't see much wrong with it. Addendum for December 12, 2019: In order to bring the format of the earlier chapters into line with Chapter 7 onwards, I’ve made an updated version of this page, which is larger, with clearer text. Hopefully, this will make the earlier chapters easier to read. |
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