November 15, 2014

                                


Commentary for November 15, 2014:

On the rare occasions that Star Trek ever depicts characters going down to a planet wearing anything but their regular duty uniforms, I've really appreciated the thought. To be fair, though, only the Kirk era movies and Enterprise seem to have given it that much thought. I figured that, at the least, Union Fleet officers might put on an excursion jacket when travelling down to a planet (or moon, in this case), for the extra layer (and pockets), so that's what Fennec is wearing on top of his regular duty uniform here. As for Eon -- well, having found no enemies on the base, it would probably be more comfortable to remove the heavy armour plating from his outfit, stripping down to just the basic pressurised body suit underneath, which is why he and Cookirini are dressed differently here.

Once again, I'm pleased with the art here, although I think the colour scheme on the Imperial computer screens is a little too Fischer Price, frankly. I may tweak it for Chapter 6.

Addendum for December 12, 2019:

In order to bring the format of the earlier chapters into line with Chapter 7 onwards, I’ve made an updated version of this page, which is larger, with clearer text. Hopefully, this will make the earlier chapters easier to read.


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