July 31, 2013

                                


Commentary for July 31, 2013:

I'm not really sure there's much to say about this page, honestly. It was pretty straightforward, really. I'm not sure about the motion lines in panel 2, but generally I think I did a good job here.

Addendum for October 3, 2019:

In order to bring the format of the earlier chapters into line with Chapter 7 onwards, I’ve made an updated version of this page, which is larger, with clearer text. Hopefully, this will make the earlier chapters easier to read.


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