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Commentary

Serena's head looks too small in panel 1. Aside from that, I think the art looks all right on this page.

I figured it was worth reminding older listeners what "UNDF" stands for, as well as letting newer readers know, but doing so in a less ham-fisted way than having one of the characters say the entire name "United Nations Defence Force" out loud, because how often do you say "Royal Air Force" or "National Aeronautics and Space Administration" out loud in conversation? Typically, you'll just "RAF" or "NASA".

Anyways, it was nice to see some speculation about the what might happen next recently on the forum. It's good to know someone's reading!

Commentary for June 22, 2013

 


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